Stop Getting Rejected. Find Out How To Improve Your Script!
Former development executives & WGA writers give you the honest notes that actually improve
your script. 14-day turnaround. No AI.
Professional Feedback Helps You Avoid These Expensive Mistakes:
❌ Submitting to contests before your opening 10 pages hook the reader
→ Our readers identify where your story loses momentum
❌ Querying managers when your structure has a fatal second-act problem
→ We diagnose pacing and structure issues that cause instant passes
❌ Paying for coverage that gives you generic praise without actionable fixes
→ You get scene-level notes you can implement immediately
❌ Entering pilot competitions when your characters aren't distinct enough
→ We assess whether your pilot stands out in today's TV landscape
❌ Wondering if your script is "good enough" without professional validation
→ You'll know exactly where you stand and what to improve before spending another dime on submissions
Honest, professional feedback, so your next draft becomes your strongest.
Theatrical marketplace analysis from readers who've worked in studio development.
$89
What You'll Receive:
● 2-3 pages of detailed notes covering structure, character arcs, and marketability
● Opening pages assessment: Does your first 10 pages compete with scripts that get bought?
● Specific fixes for second-act pacing issues
● Target audience clarity: Who is this movie for and why will they show up?
● 14-day turnaround (usually faster)
Series potential analysis from readers who understand what streamers & networks are buying.
$79
What You'll Receive:
● 2-3 pages of detailed notes covering structure, character introduction, and series engine
● Is your pilot's world distinct enough to stand out in a crowded TV landscape?
● Character assessment: Are your leads memorable and castable?
● Series sustainability: Does your premise support 5+ seasons or is it a limited series?
● 14-day turnaround (usually faster)
Festival-focused notes from readers who judge short film competitions.
$49
What You'll Receive:
● 1 page of targeted notes on story clarity, emotional impact, and production feasibility
● Does your short have a clear beginning, middle, and end in under 15 pages?
● Festival readiness: Is this concept strong enough to compete at Sundance/SXSW shorts programs?
● 14-day turnaround (usually faster)
Reviewed by the Pros Who Know What Gets Greenlit
Your script will be analyzed by former studio development executives, WGA writers, and contest judges who've read thousands of scripts professionally. They know what producers respond to, what agents look for, and what causes instant passes. This is the same level of feedback that writers pay $500+ for from boutique consultancies - but faster and more affordable.
Why We Don't Use AI Tools:
Scripts are evaluated on emotional resonance, character authenticity, and marketplace fit - nuances that require human judgment. Our readers have optioned scripts, staffed writers rooms, and greenlighted projects. AI can't replicate that expertise.
What Writers Are Saying
"I can't tell you how thrilling it is when
an intelligent person gets what I'm
trying to say and injects constructive
notes to elevate it." ~ Linda P. - Writer
"The reader made such astute
observations and comprehended
everything we were going for and
communicated it to us in an superbly
written fashion." Mike H. & Kelly M. - Writers
"Their notes confirmed my own thoughts
on what needed improvement and
their positive feedback was helpful for
pitching my material." Nicolar P. - Writer
"Thank you so much for the excellent
review. This is a big help! Nice to have
an outside look at the story." Kenneth W. - Writer
